The Dark Secret (book): Revision history

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  • curprev 18:3318:33, 27 September 2022 >Sky from wof 100% real m 17,150 bytes +5 Fixing some errors with commas. I apologize if I corrected something already correct, as my ADHD medicine makes writing harder for me.

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  • curprev 18:0718:07, 6 December 2020 >Bloodfrost of the IceWings 17,339 bytes −14 __NOWYSIWYG__ no longer functioning; "saltwater" (one word) is an adjective ("salt water" is the noun (or rather, salt is a shortened adjective, "saltine," and "water" is the noun)); passive voice to active voice conversion; wording; grammar

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  • curprev 19:0219:02, 8 November 2020 >Bloodfrost of the IceWings 17,360 bytes −24 Wording and Grammar changes. For example, the sentence about Battlewinner jumping out of the lava was technically saying that the ice jumped out of the lava, not that Battlewiner jumped out of the lava (that's called a dangling modifier); also, don't combine em dashes with commas (don't do this: TEXTTEXT, — TEXTTEXT — TEXTTEXT. (the comma before the first em dash.))

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  • curprev 17:1917:19, 6 October 2020 >Bloodfrost of the IceWings m 17,376 bytes +24 "You may be looking for …" sections are completely italicized (Thread:6125163); it's preferred to have whitespace between the header text & equals signs (Thread:6049345#4); Unicode conversio; quotation accuracy;

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